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Post by Cid on Oct 2, 2009 22:09:38 GMT -5
Hello playerbase, it's time for you to go on your yearly scavenger hunt. You must comb the site thoroughly for typos and report them here where they will then be fixed.
K.
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Post by Ketara on Oct 2, 2009 22:27:01 GMT -5
Cid is staff, btw. Listen to Cid.
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Draco
Rogue 
Anaheim Electronics Employee
Anaheim Hitman
Posts: 1,240
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Post by Draco on Oct 2, 2009 23:03:05 GMT -5
Hello playerbase, it's time for you to go on your yearly scavenger hunt. You must comb the site thoroughly for typos and report them here where they will then be fixed. K. I tried that earlier and decided suicide was easier. |
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Post by Cid on Oct 3, 2009 0:26:07 GMT -5
Main
- All the times you put commas outside of quotation marks in the credits. That is the British, thus WRONG, way of doing it.
Rules
- Drop downs on Rules don't really match up perfectly. Mostly the Overview section. But I know we had an issue with that.
- oywrpg4@gmail.com needs to be underlined since it is a link in the Overview section, near the bottom.
- Need an extra <br> between bottom of Overview and Proper Decorum.
- "explanative" in the "E-mailing" part is not a word. Maybe you meant "explanatory."
- Again, "oywrpg4@gmail.com" should be underlined at the bottom of the E-mailing section.
- Suggest linking the NT explanation thread to the NT portion of "Your Character."
- Same with ranks (Divisions).
- MS Team section, "...since moving movement in Space is much more difficult." Awkward.
- Fleet description should have the rogue exception for flagship, or you can just keep it all on the Rogue Rules page.
- NPC Unit Levels needs a <b>.
- "...noted with an N or I after their level, such as "lvl3N"." Under same section, no idea what "I" is... maybe it's new. Period inside of quotations please.
- Under Damage section, TONS of things outside of quotation marks.
- Under Death and Dying, Destroyed not sure what this means, "If the unit is in the shop, the destroyed result will be 1 point, or 3 for Limit One units."
- Ship repairs, the levels of a ship repair levels aren't all capitalized uniformly.
- Period outside of quotation mark in Actions, Move. Will no longer go into great detail regarding these.
- Actions, Battles, "You may only attack enemy your position." Left out "at."
- Optional Armaments section could link to forums post on the same subject.
- Maybe other subsections should have blue hyphen in front of them, i.e. the Battle type section, Territory, etc.
- Under fleet special actions, "- Patrol:Fleets." Need space. Also "patroling" is supposed to be "patrolling."
- Joining section needs oyw4@gmail.com <u>.
All I got for now.
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Post by latooni on Oct 3, 2009 2:08:20 GMT -5
In the tables topic, specialization post:
This confused me for a moment, until I figured you must have meant "Earth" specialization.
Also, you spelled receive wrong. Twice. Possibly more in other places.
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Post by Ketara on Oct 3, 2009 11:56:54 GMT -5
Do I need to add an example for the Destroyed rules? Those are new and pretty confusing.
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Frenzy
ZMF Officer 
Commander
Could be Ramsus.
Posts: 2,152
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Post by Frenzy on Oct 3, 2009 12:14:36 GMT -5
It might help. I remember that a Zeon player in a Xamel had his suit destroyed at the very end of Odessa last run. That might make a good example.
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Post by Ketara on Oct 3, 2009 13:00:15 GMT -5
Okay, made Cids changes, tell me what you think of the new Destroyed section.
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Frenzy
ZMF Officer
Commander
Could be Ramsus.
Posts: 2,152
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Post by Frenzy on Oct 3, 2009 13:07:44 GMT -5
So, if the unit that we lost was in the shop, we get only one day destroyed status, unless it's limited to one per purchase?, in which case we're out of action for 3 days. And finally, if it's not in the shop, it's 6 days unless there's only one, in which case 6 days and another unit.
But what if, say, my Rick Dom is destroyed, and I survive, and I pick Rick Dom again? Would I still operate at half VP even though it's the same model as my last machine?
And also, does the Helsing Fleet have any leveled machines in it, or is Helsing himself, and the rest of his fleet, all at lvl 1?
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Post by Ketara on Oct 3, 2009 13:12:36 GMT -5
Helsing needs to be fixed, but you've got the jist of it.
You cannot switch units if you get a Destroyed status unless your unit was one of a kind, and then you have to. Moving to a new suit of the same type doesn't affect the 1/2 VP bit, I changed the wording of that slightly to reflect this.
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Post by Cid on Oct 3, 2009 15:06:58 GMT -5
Site as a whole
- OYW favorites icon doesn't show up. Where is the Zeong. :<
Rogue rules
- Suggest placing an extra <br> between major sections. All the spacing is the same right now, regardless if it is a subsection.
- Throughout, spelled "Guerrilla" wrong. But I know you don't care.
- Suggest linking to Zeon MA rule and Federation MS rule on the Ships and Fleets section.
- Suggest giving an example of a rogue purchase from another shop on the Shop Purchases section, to show how much things are. Most people should know what 2x means, though.
- From the Actions - Battles section, "A Blackout is an ambush where the Rogue disguises themselves as a Zeon or Federation unit." So rogues cannot disguise themselves as Riah, CMC, LMC, or JDEG?
- Should probably mention that ships cannot make forage actions in the Actions - Special actions section.
- Need period at the end of Diplomacy section after the link. Put it OUTSIDE of the </a>.
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Post by Anastasia on Oct 3, 2009 17:22:21 GMT -5
No! Hello playerbase, it's time for you to go on your yearly scavenger hunt. You must comb the site thoroughly for typos and report them here where they will then be fixed. K. I tried that earlier and decided suicide was easier. Wow, I like your thinking, Draco. |
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Post by Ketara on Oct 5, 2009 8:08:27 GMT -5
Can I get some people to look through the shops for typos =3
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Ryocha
ZMF
Master Chief Petty Officer
I know where you sleep.
Posts: 793
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Post by Ryocha on Oct 5, 2009 9:22:09 GMT -5
Do we have to be socialist? I heard capitalism is pretty cool.
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Post by Ketara on Oct 5, 2009 10:43:09 GMT -5
Paying people = BIAS
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