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Post by Ketara on Nov 23, 2009 22:23:08 GMT -5
Pretty simple contest.
Find errors on the site. Anywhere on the site, be it website pages, official forum threads, MS profiles, etc. Errors can be typos, or they can be problems with the site design, or even suggestions you'd like to give.
For each valid mistake you find and post on this thread, you will get 1 RP as a thanksgiving present. First come first serve.
Happy hunting!
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Gray
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Post by Gray on Nov 23, 2009 22:26:54 GMT -5
In the Appendix topic, specifically the deep space post, four of the links take you to the wrong page. The links are for the Asteroid Belt, Earth Sphere, Mars Sphere, and Jupiter Sphere.
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Chan
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Rear Admiral
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Post by Chan on Nov 23, 2009 22:28:03 GMT -5
Kira Yamato is not bolded on the 1st Independent Disco Fleet page.
Marc Simmons is labeled as being on the "Emil Myberg" on the Disco Fleet Tenant description.
Zeon Expeditionary Fleet is not italicized.
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Isaiah
ZMF
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Moves like Acguy
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Post by Isaiah on Nov 23, 2009 22:29:07 GMT -5
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Gray
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Post by Gray on Nov 23, 2009 22:32:52 GMT -5
In the table thread there are few mistakes for the Specials. Under Versatile it reads "piloting somebody elses" when it should be "piloting somebody else's". Mercernary should be changed to Mercenary. Under Informant it reads "words from enemies message boad" when it should be "words from enemy's message board".
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Kale
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Post by Kale on Nov 23, 2009 22:37:34 GMT -5
Rules Page
Rules
Overview
- First paragraph, first sentence: "sidestories" is more appropriately written as "side-stories"
- Second paragraph, first sentence: "messageboards" is more appropriately written as "message boards"
- Second paragraph, last sentence: "everyones" is "everyone's"
Proper decorum
- Chatroom rules: "Chatroom" is more appropriatley written as "Chat room"
Emailing
- Third paragraph, last sentence: "consistant" is "consistent"
RP
- First paragraph, third sentence: "recieve" is "receive"
Specializations
- Second paragraph, first sentence: "recieve" is "receive"
Ships
- First paragraph, second sentence: "refuelling" is "refueling"
NPC unit levels
- Last paragraph, first sentence: "newtypes" is consistently capitalized in your game; should be "Newtypes"
Ship Repairs
- First paragraph, second sentence: "Lighty Damage" should be "Lightly Damaged"
Battle
- Final paragraph, first sentence: "supercede" is "supersede"
Plans and Organization
- First paragraph, occurs twice, in third and fourth sentences: "Chans" should be "Chan's"
Overwatch
- Two errors in paragraph. First sentence: "preperation" is "preparation" | Third sentence: "udpate" is "update"
Scout
- First paragraph, second sentence: "sides" should be "side's"
Paradrop
- First paragraph, second sentence: "paradropping" is consistently capitalized elsewhere in the paragraph
Orbit
- First paragraph, third sentence: "recieving" should be "receiving"
FFAs
- First paragraph, second sentence: "recieve" should be "receive"
EF Shop Page
Ruin
- First paragraph, last sentence. "seperate" should be spelled "separate"
Sealed
- First paragraph, first and last sentenced: "martain" should be capitalized
Island
- Under advantages, first sentence: "asssualt" should be "assault"
Add-Ons
- First paragraph, second sentence: "targetted" should be "targeted"
Minefield
- First paragraph, second sentence: "seperately" to "separately"
Perimiter Wall
- The name itself is misspelled. It should be "Perimeter"
Trenches
- Two mistakes. First paragraph, second sentence: "surviveability" should be "survivability" | First paragraph, last sentnece: "seige" should be "siege"
Enlarged Hangar
- First paragraph, only sentence: "servicable" should be "serviceable"
AA machine gun turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Depth Charge Launcher
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Defense Satellite
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Cannon Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
MPC Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Howitzer
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Large MPC
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Space Defense Platform
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Anti Orbit Missile Array
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Marines
- First paragraph first sentence: "footsoldier" is two words: foot, soldier
Ball
- First paragraph first sentence: "wisened" should be "wizened"
Salamis
- First paragraph, second sentence: "comporable" to "comparable"
Zeon Shop
Ruin
- First paragraph, last sentence. "seperate" should be spelled "separate"
Sealed
- First paragraph, first and last sentenced: "martain" should be capitalized
Island
- Under advantages, first sentence: "asssualt" should be "assault"
Add-Ons
- First paragraph, second sentence: "targetted" should be "targeted"
Minefield
- First paragraph, second sentence: "seperately" to "separately"
Perimiter Wall
- The name itself is misspelled. It should be "Perimeter"
Trenches
- Two mistakes. First paragraph, second sentence: "surviveability" should be "survivability" | First paragraph, last sentnece: "seige" should be "siege"
Enlarged Hangar
- First paragraph, only sentence: "servicable" should be "serviceable"
AA machine gun turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Depth Charge Launcher
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Defense Satellite
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Cannon Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
MPC Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Howitzer
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Large MPC
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Space Defense Platform
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Anti Orbit Missile Array
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Marines
- First paragraph first sentence: "footsoldier" is two words: foot, soldier
Rogue Shop
Ruin
- First paragraph, last sentence. "seperate" should be spelled "separate"
Sealed
- First paragraph, first and last sentenced: "martain" should be capitalized
Island
- Under advantages, first sentence: "asssualt" should be "assault"
Add-Ons
- First paragraph, second sentence: "targetted" should be "targeted"
Minefield
- First paragraph, second sentence: "seperately" to "separately"
Perimiter Wall
- The name itself is misspelled. It should be "Perimeter"
Trenches
- Two mistakes. First paragraph, second sentence: "surviveability" should be "survivability" | First paragraph, last sentnece: "seige" should be "siege"
Enlarged Hangar
- First paragraph, only sentence: "servicable" should be "serviceable"
AA machine gun turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Depth Charge Launcher
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Defense Satellite
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Cannon Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
MPC Turret
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Howitzer
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Large MPC
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Space Defense Platform
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Anti Orbit Missile Array
- Under Effective VP: "targetting" to "targeting"
Depagg
- Two errors. Both in first paragraph, first sentence: "de-comissioned" should be "decommissioned" and "personell" should be "personnel"
Type 60
- First paragraph, first sentence: "de-comissioned" should be "decommissioned"
Ball K Type
- First paragraph, first sentence: "de-comissioned" should be "decommissioned"
Dragonfly
- First paragraph, first sentence: "propellor" should be "propeller"
Mongoose
- First paragraph, first sentence: "de-comissioned" should be "decommissioned"
Dracken E
- Note: First sentence, last two word: "moons surface" should be "moon's surface"
Republic Patrol Boat
- First sentence: "The Riah Republics" should be "The Riah Republic's"
Republic Patrol Ship
- First sentence: "The Riah Republics" should be "The Riah Republic's"
Interplanetary Transport Craft
- First sentence: "interplanatary" should be "interplanetary"
Dummy Units
- Addendum, second sentence: "accomodate" should be "accommodate"
Variants
- Three errors. First paragraph, second sentence: "reversable" is "reversible". First paragraph, second sentence: "irreversable" is "irreversible". Under the Note: "Ef" should be "EF"
Custom Headspike
- First paragraph, second sentence: "comminications" should be "communications"
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Gray
EFF Officer
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Post by Gray on Nov 23, 2009 22:50:32 GMT -5
Map Page
Under Side 4 it reads "defends Zeons far flank" when it should read "defends Zeon's far flank".
All Shop Pages
Under Mines, Vespene Gas is spelled Vespine Gas. Further the wrong "it's" is being used. I believe you were going for "its" instead of "it's".
In the Atmospheric description, Minovsky-craft compressors are spelled "Minovski-craft compressors".
EF Shop pages
Under GM Ground it should read "its maneuverability" instead of "it's maneuverability".
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Gray
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Post by Gray on Nov 23, 2009 22:58:56 GMT -5
Divisions Thread
Under Mobile Assault Force, receive is spelled recieve.
Under Schutzstaffel, Gihrens personal military police should be spelled "Gihren's personal military police.
Under Newtype Korps, it should be spelled Kycillia's instead of Kycillias.
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Kale
EFF Officer
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Post by Kale on Nov 23, 2009 23:03:25 GMT -5
Thanksgiving should be capitalized.
Rogue Rules Page
Teams
- First paragraph, third sentence: "recieving" should be "receiving"
Joining Page
2: Class choice
- First paragraph, second sentence: "Greyed" should be "Grayed"; this is not just a case of "grey" versus "gray".
5: Email/Board account
- First paragraph, first sentence: "Messageboard" is better written as "Message board". It probably shouldn't be capitalized, either.
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Gray
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Post by Gray on Nov 23, 2009 23:10:38 GMT -5
Under Acguy, sheilding should be shielding. Interchangable should be interchangeable.
Under Adzam, intened should read intended.
The hangar capacity on the Federation Transport Craft's profile page reads differently than its shop page's.
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Kale
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Post by Kale on Nov 23, 2009 23:11:04 GMT -5
Map (SPACE)
Opening
- Second paragraph, last sentence: "seperate" should be "separate"
0-5 Days from Earth
- First paragraph, last sentence; "traveller" should be "traveler"
Moon
- First paragraph, second sentence, two errors: "moons" should be "moon's" | "independant" should be "independent"
- First paragraph, last sentence: "planets" should be "planet's"
Side 4
- First paragraph, second sentence: "Zeons" should be "Zeon's"
Side 7
- First paragraph, second sentence: "waystations" is two words: way, stations
Map (EARTH)
Opening
- Second paragraph, last sentence: "seperate" should be "separate"
Earths Surface
- Header: "Earths Surface" should be "Earth's Surface"
Earths Oceans
- Header: "Earths Oceans" should be "Earth's Oceans"
- First paragraph, first sentence: "Earths Oceans" should be "Earth's Oceans"
North Africa
- First paragraph, second sentence, two errors: "Suez canal" should be "Suez Canal" | "travellers" should be "travelers"
North America
- First paragraph, first sentence: "Zeons" should be "Zeon's"
- First paragraph, third sentence, two errors: "It's" at beginning should be "Its" | "caribbean" should be "Caribbean"
- First paragraph, last sentence: "seperated" should be "separated"
South America
- First paragraph, second sentence: "Andes mountains" should be "Andes Mountains"
East Arctic
- First paragraph, second sentence: "It's" at beginning should be "Its"
- Second paragraph, seconds entence: "passageable" isn't a word; "passable" is more appropriate
West Arctic
- First paragraph, second sentence: "passageable" isn't a word; "passable" is more appropriate
The 3 Antarctic Sectors
- First paragraph, last sentence: "Antarcticas" should be "Antarctica's"
Central Asia
- First paragraph, first sentence, two errors: "seperated" should be "separated" | "Ural mountains" should be "Ural Mountains"
- First paragraph, last sentence: "accessable" should be "accessible"
East Asia
- First paragraph, second sentence: "seperated" is "separated"
Indian Ocean
- First paragraph, first sentence: "travellers" should be "travelers"
Pacific Ocean
- First paragraph, first sentence: "wordls" should be "world's"
First paragraph, second sentence: "Hawaii islands" should be "Hawaii Islands"
Bases Page
Introduction
- Second paragraph, first sentence: "seperate" should be "separate"
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Kale
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Post by Kale on Nov 23, 2009 23:34:50 GMT -5
Main Forums
Forum Rules Post
- Under the fourth paragraph, first sentence: "persistantly" should be "persistently"
Battle Writing Format Post
- Step 4: Outcomes
-- Fifth paragraph, first sentence: "elses" should be "else's"
-- Sixth paragraph, second sentence: "Duellist" should be "Duelist"
-- Eleventh paragraph, first sentence: "consistant" should be "consistent"
- Second Post
-- Header: "Vlads" should be "Vlad's"
-- Sentence directly under images: "Ta da" should be "Tada"
- Pre-writing set up
-- Header: "set up" should be "setup"
-- Under Third: "sides" should be "side's"
Prize Ships Thread
- Second paragraph, second sentence: "Greyed" should be "Grayed"
- Magellan II
-- First paragraph, first sentence: "commad" should be "command"
- Gundam Zephyr
-- "newtype" should be capitalized twice in the paragraph, to remain consistent with its use on the site
- Everest class Battleship
-- First paragraph, second sentence: "superceded" should be "superseded"
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "continously" should be "continuously"
- Gaw Reconnaisance Type
-- First paragraph, first sentence: "minovski" should be "Minovski" or "Minovsky"
- Jotunheim
-- First paragraph, second-to-last sentence: "Zeons" should be "Zeon's"
- lvl3 SS Special Forces Operative
-- First paragraph, first sentence, two errors: "Gihrens" should be "Gihren's" | "seamelessly" should be "seamlessly"
- Nerve Gas
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "targetted" should be "targeted"
- Bernal Sphere colony
-- First paragraph, first sentence and second sentences: "O'Niell" should be "O'Neill"
-- Standard Defences: "Defences" should be "Defenses"
- Spoils of War
-- First paragraph, first sentence, two errors: "psycommu" should be "Psycommu" as it is consistently capitalized elsewhere | "extoardinary" should be "extraordinary"
Divisions Post
- Earth Federal Space Forces
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "Zeons" should be "Zeon's"
- Earth Federal Ground Forces Officer
-- FIrst paragraph, first sentence: "footsoldiers" is two words: "foot" and "soldiers"
- Space Assault Force
-- First paragraph, first sentence: "Zeons" is "Zeon's"
- Mobile Assault Force
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "Zeons" is "Zeon's"
- Newtype Korps
-- First paragraph, first sentence: "newtypes" isn't capitalized, despite being consistently capitalized on the site
Table Thread
- Optional Armaments
-- "Torpedos" should be "Torpedoes"
- Specializations
-- Second paragraph, second sentence: "recieve" to "receive"
-- Second paragraph, last sentence: "recieve" to "receive"
-- Under Special, Versatile: "elses" to "else's"
-- Under Special, Mercernary: should be "Mercenary"
-- Under Special, Expert Crew: "ships" to "ship's"
- Side RP
-- First paragraph, first sentence: "sunday" to "Sunday"
-- Second paragraph, first sentence: "sunday" to "Sunday"
-- Territory gains, two errors: "antarctic" should be "Antarctic" twice
OYW Tactics Post
- Ships
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "refuelling" to "refueling"
- Space combat
-- First paragraph, "and terrible in a minovski cloud" should be "... in a Minovski..." or "... a Minovsky..."
-- First paragraph, second-to-last sentence: "morse code" to "Morse code"
Appendixes Post
- Ships
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "refuelling" to "refueling"
- Space combat
-- First paragraph, "and terrible in a minovski cloud" should be "... in a Minovski..." or "... a Minovsky..."
-- First paragraph, second-to-last sentence: "morse code" to "Morse code"
- Deep Space
-- First paragraph, last sentence: "teh" to "the"
- Combat
-- First paragraph, "When the two sihps/fleets..." should be "... two ships/fleets..."
- Obtaining message board passwords
-- Third paragraph, third sentence: "Lets" to "Let's"
- Damaging Bases
-- Second paragraph, second sentence: "seperately" to "separately"
-- Under Infrastructure, in Barracks: "adequete" to "adequate"
- Types of Damage
-- Under "Calculating Destroyed Points", second paragraph: "... Vina Sealanders Guncannon..." should be "... Vina Sealanders' Guncannon..."
-- Under "Missing in Action", second paragraph: "transfered" to "transferred"
RP Forums
Antarctic Treaty Post
- Under "Article VIII" Minovsky is spelled "Minovski"
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Post by latooni on Nov 23, 2009 23:44:32 GMT -5
In the ships page:
- The Chicken Little should be (R)
- The Golden Platypus should be (R)
- Cannery Row should be (R)
- Dragon's Luggun should be (D)
- Dragon's Zaku II K should be (A)
- White Base's Guntank should be (A)
Ohm Fleet
- STS-67 should be marked (R) instead of (D)
EFGF 1st resupply fleet
- Dish should be marked (D)
Side 3 Defense Fleet
- Asghald should be (O)
- Bavarian should be (O)
Dren Fleet
- Camel should be (O)
- Swamel should be (O)
- Tokumel should be (O)
Zeon Expeditionary Force
- Erinyes should be (O)
Jupiter Energy Fleet Alpha
- Alpha Centauri should have (R) next to the ship class, not the name
- Andromeda should have (R) next to the ship class, not the name
RF-1
- Luggun should be (D)
Kimberlite
- Luggun should be (D)
North American Patrols
- 14th Airborne's Luggun should be (D)
California Base
- Zaku II K should be (A)
New York
- Large MPC should be (A)
Mexico City
- Luggun should be (A)
Rio de Janero
- Godwin Austen's Dish should be (D)
- Plain's Dish should be (D)
Augusta
- Ginga should be (O)
Hughendon
- Luggun should be (D)
Torrington
- Gesualdo should not be (R)
- Byrd should be (R)
Odessa
- U-18's Acguys should be (S)
Lhasa
- Luggun should be (D)
Archangelisk
- Luggun should be (D)
Malta
- Steppe's Dish should be (D)
Ceylon
- Type 74 should be (D)
- Forrest's Dish should be (D)
- Clearing's Dish should be (D)
- Busnois' Type 74 should be (D)
Honolulu
- Type 74 should be (D)
- Valley's Dish should be (D)
- Pasture's Dish should be (D)
Pezun
- Zaku II E should be (D)
Amador City, Mars
- Dish should be (D)
Axis
- Zaku II E should be (D)
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Post by Ketara on Nov 23, 2009 23:54:21 GMT -5
FYI: Anything involving any spelling of the word guerrrrrrrrrillllllllllllla is not accepted as an error.
Fuck Cid.
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Nomad
Rogue 
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Post by Nomad on Nov 24, 2009 0:01:40 GMT -5
The GM S lacks the GM Beam Spray Gun that's listed on mahq, or is that on purpose?
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