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Post by Ketara on Nov 24, 2009 23:59:17 GMT -5
ROFL
Screw you =P
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jon
Junior Member
Palm Pilot
Posts: 169
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Post by jon on Nov 25, 2009 5:59:36 GMT -5
Suggestion - Marcus gets 1 RP per post.
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tylatz
EFF 
Sergeant
Posts: 261
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Post by tylatz on Nov 25, 2009 10:31:16 GMT -5
Ok, guess I'll post some stuff. - The African Liberation Front broadcasts a manifesto echoing the desire for a free Africa ruled by Africans, originating in the Congo river valley. You may want to change Congo River Valley to Congo River Basin or just Congo Basin. This is the appropriate term for the geographic region. It also gets away from the fact the river is also known as the Zaire. There is no African Liberation Front. I may have made mentioning of it in early conceptional ideas in IRC, but never in a post. The last line of The Manifesto denotes the group as the African Union. In my own bio the actual forces are referred to as the African Union Forces. This needs to be corrected in several instances throughout the time-line in addition to the one already presented. 0079.09.05 - The African Liberation Front assaults and destroys the most prominent ZMF resource gathering plant in Southern Africa, a symbol of their resistance against foreign oppression. 0079.09.16 - The TAF recaptures RF-4 from the African Liberation Movement. However, the compound has been completely destroyed and is no longer of use to the Duchy. 0079.09.18 - Des Mielle and his African Liberation Movement assault RF-2 in the northern Sahara. However, they are met with much stronger resistance than they faced in the Congo, and their attack is repelled. I think I should get double points for pointing out that there is a lack of consistency as you switch from African Liberation Front to African Liberation Movement. Do I also get points for pointing out that the Type-61 defending the ruins of RF-4 vanished and that the attack involved a mobile suit leaping over a sand dune in the Congo in the battle mentioned above? As a side note, are all writers aware that rogue NPC's have operative by default? It is only mentioned in stuff dealing with rogues and is easy to overlook. I think it's mentioned twice outside of the guerrillas and marines that have it listed in their profile. The Dragon's location is listed as North Africa (Tunisia), but it is also listed as a tenant at RF-1 in North Africa. |
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Post by aleksei on Nov 25, 2009 12:28:37 GMT -5
In the base section, Rio de Janero should be Rio de Janeiro.
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Kale
EFF Officer
Sublieutenant
Posts: 620
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Post by Kale on Nov 25, 2009 15:29:32 GMT -5
Slade Garadan's roster entry isn't collapsible.
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Post by latooni on Nov 25, 2009 19:18:01 GMT -5
Ships page, Callysto should be (R). Overlooked that last time.
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Post by ender on Nov 25, 2009 22:33:50 GMT -5
Events page, Battle of Malta. You listed Lucas as still being alive in the event. He died at RF-1 (at least as I had roleplayed it)
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Zero
New Member
Posts: 10
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Post by Zero on Nov 26, 2009 18:48:37 GMT -5
Not sure if it is a mistake or not.
But.
Archangelisk in real life is normally spelt Arkhangelsk I believe.
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Post by Ketara on Nov 27, 2009 14:24:48 GMT -5
Just did a brief look through of all the stuff that's been checked on.
It's mostly typos, I'm not seeing much in regards to rules inconsistancies, although there probably is much less of that.
Some things I'd like people to check up on:
MS profile pages, specifically where armaments on an MS profile are different from armaments on the shop entry, and entries whose quick stats are wrong in relation to other units.
Shop entries whose wording is obsolete and doesn't match definitional changes in the rules in recent runs. For example, "repairing" has a specific definition as a type of damage now and is seperate from "damaged" which means all types of damage. This was changed recently for this run.
Places in the Appendixes and Tables threads that don't match up perfectly with the rules and/or with each other.
Mobile suits in the "optional armaments at joining" thread whose armaments do not match what I've given players with the suit.
Other than that thanks everybody, I will be doing all these fixes and giving people their RP over the weekend.
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Nomad
Rogue
[Insert Coin]
Posts: 42
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Post by Nomad on Nov 27, 2009 19:49:43 GMT -5
The GM S is listed with a 360mm Hyper Bazooka and 90 mm machine gun on mahq. The roster entry shows a 305 mm GM bazooka and 100mm GM machinegun.
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Radune
ZMF Officer 
Ensign
The child of the sun
Posts: 428
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Post by Radune on Nov 27, 2009 20:40:05 GMT -5
Not sure if anyone has mentioned this yet.. but in the "Zeon Expiditionary Force" fleet page, clicking on any of the ship owners gives you a 404.
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Nomad
Rogue
[Insert Coin]
Posts: 42
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Post by Nomad on Nov 28, 2009 4:53:06 GMT -5
Spelling error in the thanksgiving FFA
"James Radcliff - 2 VP gained, 2 CP gainede"
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tylatz
EFF
Sergeant
Posts: 261
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Post by tylatz on Nov 28, 2009 8:10:17 GMT -5
The Golden Platypus has a location entry of Southeast Asia HQ, but is not listed as a tenant of Southeast Asia HQ on the bases page and neither is Aurem Senaiha whose location happens to be the base instead of the ship.
Ritter Novosad's location is listed as Malta, but he is not included on the list of tenants for Malta on the base page.
Xavier Brennan is listed as being at Odessa, but he is not included on the list of tenants for Odessa on the base page.
Scarth Maheart is listed as being at Ultra Magnus when it should be at Sunstorm or wherever he was last.
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Post by Cid on Nov 28, 2009 14:42:26 GMT -5
Max defenses remaining on BR-1 should be 5.
Max MS' remaining on BR-1 should be 4.
4x lvl0 Zaku II C should not be on BR-1--we are piloting them again.
1x guerrillas at BR-1 is spelled wrong.
2x guerrillas on Bones are spelled wrong.
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Post by faultylogic on Nov 28, 2009 16:24:25 GMT -5
In the Thanksgiving FFA, you list Xander as the pilot of the Gespenst when it should've been Faultylogic.
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